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megane sport

hey ppl my first wip here, check out my megane C&C plz


edit: just to change the avatar added some new pic of the model
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It's an excellent start to me. I'm sure it's your first wip here but not your first project ever. The mesh looks pretty clean, please post unsmoothed screencap to make it sure. Also, a clay can be useful.

I've a little doubt about accuracy of the foglight : the bulge in the bumper looks too small to me. Check this refpic please : http://news-images.caradisiac.com/IM...-megane-rs.jpg

Also, almost all your edges are too sharp : please take the edge on side of hood as an example on the same refpic.

Last critic from me, the little edge of the hood bordering the headlight is just a bit too long.

Keep us updated, it's a really nice choice of car !
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nice start...its looking promecing...whait to see more updates
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@tom120934: thank you very much for the comment and yes its not my first car the picture you attached is the megane rs which isnt the same car im modeling (megane sport) Renault Mégane Sport Trophy 1024 x 768 wallpaper but still im not with the fog light coz it does not match the ref
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@pedro.malheiro thank you hope i finish this one

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hey i need your opinion, would these rims fit on this car?:roll:
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Ok, I was wrong. Not easy to tell which "sport" model you choosed between "renault sport" and "sport trophy".

You're right about the foglight : both my refpic and your model are off But I still think the little hood edge touching the headlights is still too long.

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more updates C&C are welcome and does anybody know how can i make geometry 1 sided only in 3ds max2008? thanks
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Here is my wires... Maybe you find inspiration
http://3dcreative.cba.pl/pliki/g2006/ren.htm

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sweet!! thanks mate this is really helpfull
can u post a low poly version? unsmoothed? that would be rly nice coz im kida stuck at the fog light

thanks again your model looks awosme
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Model with Meshsmooth (interations=2).
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update: fixed the fog light & removed some bumps

and please tell me if theres something wrong with the wire
C&C PLZ
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i think it looks great
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....update

C&C plz
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it's looking really nice. Just 1 tip on the wire. Where the arrow is pointing ad, on the model it looks a bit bumpy because you didn't control the curve there very well. If you cut it the way i showed you can move the fender points a bit outwards so the curvature is much better.
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hey thanks Erik for the help, ill add that line tonight and attach the result later
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hey guys, do u think those rims would look good on it? , ignore the bump map errors
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looks great...i just dont like realy much this rims in this car
but great job on modeling
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thanks pedro for the comment, ill make another set of rims, might make the originals and well see which would look better, thanks again
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