Mini

[jawalo]

my first car,

[nublet]

do you mind posting a larger pic? it's VERY hard to see...

[dissaster]

when you make the render of the model instead of making screenshot you can just save the render image by presing the disket buton to save it as a image
and aabout the model it look good , but if u post bigger images we will easy say where you jave to work mostly

[Prykie]

Also try and render it in perspective view, not user view.

[KMyers-MG]

Welcome to SMCars. From what you've posted it appears to be a nice start.

As others have said, larger images are much better in order to have someone give good feedback. As well as "saving" the render for posting, please also include large screenshots of the "wire frame" of you model so the polyflow and mesh detail can be seen. That way you will get much better responses, critiques, and help if needed.

[jms_3d]

Hello, welcome to SMcars. The model from what i can see is a pretty nice start

I have attached a picture to sshow you what button it is you need to press to save the image.

You click the save button then when the dialogug box appears you type in something like “mini_render.jpg” you need to type .jpg so it will save as a jpeg, .bmp will save as bitmap etc.
Of course you don’t need to type this in the end as you can chose from a list of file extensions (jpg, bmp, gif, png etc) hope i havnt confussed you. It is quite easy to pick up to be honest though.

Is this the first time you have actually moddeled using 3ds max? Or just a firt time at moddeling a car?


Well done and keep up the good work

James

[jawalo]

few changes, update.... thanks jms_3d
Modeling is my first car before had done little things. Sorry
My English.

[jms_3d]

Looking good so far

keep up the good work and your get it!

James

btw your english is fine

[dissaster]

look really good , especially the level of details
but i'm a litle confused, are you gonna make a cabriolet version of mini?

[jawalo]

update.

[Erik_S]

it is looking good, but the outline of the front grill does look very weird and not right. Can you show a wire? did you forget to put turbosmooth on it?

[300zx_9]

Ermm this worrys me man, check under your headlight there is a huge bump there that needs to be fxied, also a bump on the trunk of the car from the back near the middle above the license plate area, the windshield needs some edges going horizontally not just vertically, the door handle is so small and the grill is not totally smooth, these are some of the first things i spotted that i see wrong so try and fix them and hopefully this project will turn out to be a success.

Well done and keep it up don't give up.

[jawalo]

a few changes