ferrari 360 modena

[nikhil]

This is my first attempt. I work in Maya. any suggestions? comments are welcome.

[tom120934]

It's a pretty nice work, for a first project here. By the way, welcome to SMCars, I hope you'll enjoy your stay here.

I've seen several issues :
- You have a bump in headlight, at the front inner-side corner.
- Where the rim spokes meet the rim frame, it's very wavy.
- The shape of the front bumper is really unclean. Take a look to more refpic : http://www.maxi-fond-ecran.com/fond-...modena_005.jpg
- The air outtake at the bottom of the front bumper is inaccurate. Again, use more refpics.
- You have another bump on front fender, just behind the wheel arch.
- Yet another bump on the door.

I think you need to work slower, while paying much more attention to details. I hope you can get advice from NightEye, one of the top members here (but pretty rare by now) : he has a huge knowledge of the car, I see no better source of accurate advices for you.

Keep us updated !

[Lewis]

Beside what Tom already said i can say that whole car looks little puffy i.e. edges aren't sharp enough at corners where panels meet each other. Tighten up them a bit and it'll be much better.

Welcome to SMcars and don't alow that we discourage you with those crits , we just want to help . It's very good work firs try, no doubt in that.