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Old 05-11-2008
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got max up and running again, was messing around with region render in max 09, so yeah I can render now, but some weird stuff happens - get those sharp contrast lines inbetween segments of my render. also I dont think I mapped the sky right.



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DUDE... I loaded this page up and for a split-second, I thought that was a photo!!

Nice one chief!! Just keep polishing and this will deffinately be one of your coolest projects

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Very nice work, it does look like a photo!!!

But IMO, the road paint stripes is too thick, needs to be thinner. Also glass seems a not transparent enough. Paint is sorta bit bright.
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Yes i thought this was a photoshoot aswell.Pretty render.
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I don't think for a second it way a real photo. Not because of your work, just because of aliasing on your model. Try to get rid of it, it ruins your model.

IMHO the rims don't suit the car : they look too fragile for such a powerful monster.

Please also add glass covers to your headlights.

The whole picture (except for aliasing) looks damn good. Integration of the car within the scene feels really natural. And the lighting is lovely : pretty realistic but not as crude as a simple sun. Just what is needed of overexposition, brilliant work !



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thanks guys, erm photo - nah, long way to go man.

@et - ya, made the stripes a little thinner, not such dark edges around it now, paint is bright because my sun is too bright, and the glass, hmmm I used realistic values for IOR will check that.

@tom - aliasing, yeah I need to fix that, need to see something in max though, seems I cant use some shadow types, rims, hmmmmmmmmmm i will see, but im not going to change them until I like something, fragile meh doubt it, but yeah will look into that. there is glass headlight covers, I don't know why no reflections came on them,

meesing around with the scene a bit more, trying to give it a little dirtier look.
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getting rid of all that empty space in the back. dont mind the amount of lanes, did that by mistake.
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it looks really cool. Only i don't know about the bridge,, it looks a bit simple. The scene looks cool. About your previous render, it looks nice but the top of the car is overlighted. The whole top of the car is pure white. The rest is said. But i love how it looks, you have highend the contrast? it looks that way, i like it!
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Very nice work! IMO Bridge looks weird, doesnt look like something that we normally see, try something more common, but it is up to you.

Also i think the render can be brighter.

Good Work!!!
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Impressive progress ! I agree with et_fone_home about the bridge, it looks a bit weird and oddly placed.



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very nice project, i just think the wheels need to be bigger, awesome model

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Those banners need more color in my opinion.
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Looks really good! I agree with the others about the slightly dim looking banners, and the simple bridge. IMO the bridge can work, but it'll need a lot of nice details, i'm sure you're very capable
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