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Ferrari 599 GTB Fiorano

Well.. hello

Been a very long time since I've posted, or done, any 3D work, so please don't be too mean haha :roll:

Almost finished my exams, so should be able to work on this more in a couple of weeks but i thought i'd show a little progress so far

Tell me what you think, and post as much help as possible hehe, i've gotten a little rusty


A problem I have already is the mesh around the headlights.. I'm not sure how to model the hole without having stretched looking polygons around it.. If you want I can post some larger and clearer views of what im talking about.


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Nice to see you back to serious work

Really nice choice of car, rarely seen modeled (Johnas started one, if I'm right) That's a bit weird as a V12 620hp Ferrari should be a much appreciated car. Maybe the shapes are hard, or it's just the design which doesn't have that many fans.

Anyways, your polyflow looks perfect and the hood looks damn good. I'm not sure but maybe you have a tiny little bump where you have 2 white pixels on the first picture. I let you to decide what to do, because I'm really not sure on this one.

Keep it up, and don't forget to post your progress as often as possible !
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realy nice choise of car... i like this car realy much and i agree with what Tom sayed
and its looks realy nice so far whaiting to see more updates
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Great car to model. I tried this but i lost motivation. Good luck with rest of exams. final one for me tomorrow Anyway, model is amazing.
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its looking good but can you post unsmooth wires?
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Unsmoothed wire here

Only a few changes made, 2 exams on wednesday and 1 today but now i just have 1 left and that's on the 3rd of June

CnC welcome as usual!

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Edit: Made a few changes to the wire on the front wing, hope it looks better!
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Looking like a good start clix keep it up
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very clean wires
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This front bumper is realllllly annoying me haha
This is what I have so far, anything you spot is appreciated

Tell me what you think so far
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Dont know the car itself much,model looks nice and clean.Good luck with exams[ i hate them ] I have one in two weeks that will change my life ...Anyways keep it up.
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Thanks ColdFlame, I know what you mean haha Good luck with your next exam

Here's another small update, not much but front bumper is basically done [for the moment]
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nice work i cant spot any bumps at all
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I think this edge needs to be sharper, may just be the render.
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Your Ferrari looks very good, but i discovered 2 little bumps.
Keep on working! I am sure it's going to be a great model
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It's looking good and mesh is quite clean, so keep the good work up.
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looking forward to see more updates its looking realy good
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Thanks for the crits, very helpful!

advan: yep, i see what you mean, looks different from different angles, but i've changed it.
patrick: i've fixed the bump around the headlight area, but the small tri doesnt seem to be a problem

Here's a very smalll update, basically all of it is just tweaking and redoing small parts for accuracy :roll:

Last exam is tomorrow so you should start to see some real updates soon, i'm aiming to get as much done as possible by summer

As always, any crits are welcomed
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You fixed it very well. Goodluck with your exam! Im looking forward to see some good updates!
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