Mini Cooper WIP

[Astaroth]

Hello people,
this is the first car I am modelling, still not decided if it will be a Cooper or a Cooper S.
It is modelled in 3dmax 6 using a spline cage and the surface modifier. I don't have much time for modelling, so it took me a couple of weeks to get this far ops: and I know that my mesh is not very clean, I hope my next car will be better.
Well, here are some renders, maybe some of you got a few comments or suggestions for me. Critics are also welcome, of course.

http://www.astaroth-3d.de.vu/mini/wi..._details06.jpg

http://www.astaroth-3d.de.vu/mini/wip_motorhaube.jpg

http://www.astaroth-3d.de.vu/mini/wip_motorhaube2.jpg

Tomorrow I'm gonna post a wire.

Best wishes
Astaroth

[NightEye]

You should make the S
A lot nicer IMO

Anyways, your models looks amazing sofar
But I'll wait for the renders before I start saying wrong things..

[Astaroth]

I think I'll decide later, which one I will make still have some time till I get to that point.

Here is a rear view:

http://www.astaroth-3d.de.vu/mini/wi..._details07.jpg

@NightEye: What renders do you wait for? These are renders, at least I hit the render button

[NightEye]

Oops.. I mean wirepics ops:
The back looks good too btw

[geeman222]

hi nice model so far

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NightEye

[Bjolletts]

This looks nice, good seams. just keep on detailing it

[Astaroth]

Ok, here's something to laugh.

The wire of my model :lol:

[NightEye]

Something to laugh?? No way!!
Very nice and clean wiremodel

[Astaroth]

Thanks very much for your comments, I'm just about to make the door seams. I don't know why, but detailing takes very long for me

[Astaroth]

I hope I don't post too many pictures. Here's a new one with the door seam finished, though I'm not really satisfied with it.

http://www.astaroth-3d.de.vu/mini/wip_with_doorseam.jpg

[NightEye]

The doorseem should run to the roof.. I mean, the glass is part of the door too

[Astaroth]

Yeah, I know that, just wanted to test how the seam looks on the side. :wink:

[Astaroth]

OK, here are two more pics. Fixed that doorseam and hope it's correct now.





Hope you like it

[Micke™]

looks really good. keep posting your pics... :lol:

[Astaroth]

So, here's the next pic. Tried to make the border at the bottom of the windows. Personally I think it still needs some tweaking at the rear corner.

http://www.astaroth-3d.de.vu/mini/wip_with_border.jpg

[rallydriver]

Really good model. I cant wait to see it finished

[Astaroth]

Hey, thanks a lot. I can't wait to see it finished, too. :wink:

[Astaroth]

Here's the same from the back:

http://www.astaroth-3d.de.vu/mini/wip_with_border2.jpg

[sumpex]

looking really good

[Astaroth]

Made the seam for the trunk. Still have to tweak the rear bumper to fit the seam.

http://www.astaroth-3d.de.vu/mini/wi..._trunkseam.jpg