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Old 04-27-2008
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Mercedes CLS

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I would like to show my CLS. After many work in ZMOD i tried to make a car in C4d. Hope you like it.
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Old 05-02-2008
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Sorry for doubleposting, but here is a little update. I made some details at the front. The rims are only temp, i will make the stock rims.
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Old 05-02-2008
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This looks very nice, good structure, clean body work, even look accurate ( however I cant say 100% sure since I dont look at Mercedes enough) Anyhow I like it

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Old 05-03-2008
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The hood above headlights doesn't look perfect IMHO. You're right about that rims, they're terrible.

Nice work so far, I'll be watching this one. I really like CLS.



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Well, thank you guys for the comments.
I have some little Updates. Still the old Rims, but they make it more look like a car btw. my first highpolyrims.
I haven't fixed the things you said tom, cause i will keep me motivated. I make than when the bodymesh is finished.
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Nice update, this car is coming along very nicely. I dont have much else to add, it looks good in my eyes Just the color....

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Yes, this will be good to see finished, I love the curves of this car.

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Looks good, good mesh you got there
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Thats a nice model. Wireframes look pretty clean. Keep it up.

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The rims donīt look that bad in it, BTW the model looks very good.
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Not bad. You can save more polies on the back of the fenders near the door. Like weld some points in the center. You will still have all the points you need in the edes but in the center of that transition itll be lower poly.

Thats my opinion though so its not a must. =)
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Thank you all for the relpies!
Hey Redstar, nice to see you again I'm the guy with the BMW 7er from cg-helpers.

After a little holiday trip i made a update! Critics are welcome
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Oh hey man! getting into low poly now? Well its lookin fantastic mate keep it coming!
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Thanks mate,
Btw. Can i ask why the board(cg-helpers) isn't online?
No, no. I came from Zmod where you only can model low poly. Since i saw how easy and fast you can model in C4D i will not miss that But with this car i will make a little animation, thats why the body is "low"(mid)poly. The renderer in C4D isn't the best and i hope to save rendertime
A friend of me will make the environment, but i'm not sure that he can make that we will see...
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Only a little update. I made some details at the front and rear. Some lines are not perfekt i know, but i will fix that. Hope you like it
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Looking good, but the ridge down the side, along the doors isn't straight, seems like it needs fixing.
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Looking good as far as shape, But question why does this thing come off more as 2d than 3d. Being your doorlines and the body lines around the parts just seem to cartoonish. Needs 3d edges in it to give it some subtle feel to it. Thats my only complain.

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