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Old 08-31-2006
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Audi RS4

Well hi ther

This car will be made to get an nice training period. (school thing. for the dutch ones here "stage" dunno how to explain it in english)

well, i madethe start










leave all your comments.. !


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looks really great, congrats
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Old 08-31-2006
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very sexy really nice start man keep it up rs4 is far by the best model of audi in my opinion
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Old 08-31-2006
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I love this car! good start!
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Old 08-31-2006
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thnx, and yes sean.. Best audi made!

tomorrow DTM! So maybe a late update.. sorry!

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Old 09-01-2006
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if you wanted to, you could upload the images to the smc server. then you would have small thumbnails. but suit yourself

model looks very smooth and clean.

some issues though.

imo overall most of your creases are too sharp. in fact i guess you could hurt yourself bretty badly

blue - way too sharp
red - a litte bumpy in this area
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Old 09-01-2006
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great start, Im going to follow this
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Looks great so far, I can notice pretty good accuracy on that model and its undoubtfully a pretty hard car to model not to mention the slightly problematic BPs posted by Audi itself.

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Some wires! I know they are crappy..

See something wrong? Say it please!

Silent i added that "red" area close up, i cant get rid off the bump :S

pleas help me
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hey man, nice car, i know what *stage* means, im dutch hehe..
take a look at the line on the hood, follow it from the grill to the front window, and you'l see.
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thnx.. will work that out!

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Some wires! I know they are crappy..

See something wrong? Say it please!

Silent i added that "red" area close up, i cant get rid off the bump :S

pleas help me
Not wrong, but a suggestion, add another row of polies to the front arche and curve the rear arche cause its going down too stright.

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Old 09-08-2006
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Sorry for the lack of updates!

Im very busy atm, and i have an animation project for a client!


BUT ill soon work on this car again! really wanna finish it :love:


grtz,


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Old 09-17-2006
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ok i had a lil time to spare.. Made lil bit from the bumper... And did a render test..

Colors on my other pc looked much darker oh well.. Hope its worth to show
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Old 09-18-2006
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Annnd clay's for who wants to have those
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excellent and smooth modeling. keep us updated

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Old 09-18-2006
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Doors cutted..!

And wich color render u like ?
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Old 09-18-2006
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Ok again crappy wires.. And i know its much at the back bumper...

have fun guys!
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Old 09-19-2006
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it would be nice if you could make some clay renders. those always show very nicely if you are working well without bumps

imo your wire is rather nice here and there some tris but they don't seem so be causing too much trouble

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Why is clay better then an Screenshot ?

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