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Old 09-02-2006
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Handmade in England - Aston Martin DB9

Hi,

Back with a new project. Main body almost done (mirrors missing), details started : hood and front grids for the moment. Rims are just placeholder.

C&C welcomed
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got some corrections, i think you need to look at way more refs. But looks a good base model to be refined
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well i guess andy took all the fun out and pointed out most of the inaccuracies

some point i have to add. that red line, it needs to be shaped differently.

good job on the aston, overall it looks very smooth and all. you just need to consult ref pics more closely
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Thanks a lot andybuck and Silent][Moebius for your comments. I start to fix the points you spotted right now.

Here's a rear view.
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I tried to make all corrections you indicated, guys. I would be honored if you could tell if you think mistakes are fixed.
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didnt see your latest post but here are the crits on the rear end.
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looks pritty nice to me! great going.
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good job man. i like the model it just needs some refining

red - those creases need to go away
yellow - smoother here
blue - i'm not quite sure about this but i think you have to set this line higher

about the sexiest part of this car - the rear end

imo you made it too pointy and too long. it seems to me like you would have to push in the rear bumper inwards more or it's the fault of the camera angle.
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