Dodge Challenger 1970 by Ex3

[ex3qtor]

My first post on this forum and my first car.
I`m about to finish it so i hope you could tell me what needs to be fixed
Here`s some renders:
http://www.mateuszg.com/pliki/Challenger_45.jpg
http://www.mateuszg.com/pliki/Challenger_44.jpg
http://www.mateuszg.com/pliki/Challenger_49.jpg
http://www.mateuszg.com/pliki/qubes_1.jpg
http://www.mateuszg.com/pliki/Challenger_57.jpg
http://www.mateuszg.com/pliki/Challenger_61.jpg

[MuscleCarFreak]

The mesh isn't very accurate (I wouldn't even know where to start with fixing ) but I gotta say that the materials and details are fantastic!

[docmushu]

looking good.

[DrumBoPing]

Originally Posted by MuscleCarFreak

The mesh isn't very accurate (I wouldn't even know where to start with fixing ) but I gotta say that the materials and details are fantastic!

agreed 100%

[[EKE]Siadly]

Nice, where are you from?

[skb875]

love the little details! those are the kind of things that keeps 3D fun.

Great job so far.

[R0cky103]

The hood pin and center grill are very nice and have good detail, but the rest of the car isn't very accurate. Mesh looks a bit bumpy and the side mirrors dont look very functional, seem to low on the door. Overall its a pretty decent model especially if its your first.

[Catlin]

No offence it looks like you got somebody to model the hood pin and you done the car,i might be wrong,it just seems odd to put so much detail into a small thing and miss out the biggest thing you could do getting it accurate!

Sorry if im wrong though. keep it up

[crazy 989]

yea the whole body is loaded with a bumpy mesh, and the thing Catlin says does look true - but if Im wrong sorry - looks like you downloaded it somewhere

[ex3qtor]

Thanks for comments everyone.
[EKE]Siadly - I`m from Poland
R0cky103 - About the mirrors - i`m going to change them.
Catlin/crazy 989 - About the bumpy car, It`s my first and i find it quite hard to make it perfect but the detailed work i`we done before and i do like creating details
That`s the kind of a guy i am
If you`re interested here is whole WIP ( in Polish sorry )
Pojazd 3D: Dodge Challenger - Max3D.pl Forum

Soon i`ll be updating the renders, for now i just made the front lights bigger and it`s not worth rendering

I`m counting on some more comments

:Update
The only element in this model that is not made by me is the Challenger font on the grill, and the Dodge font on backlight
:Update 2
Latest render :
http://www.mateuszg.com/pliki/Challenger_62.jpg

[LOST]

Great details, but those bumps on the body are ruining this one. You should try to get rid of them.

[ex3qtor]

I fixed some bumps and the mirror (i`ll work on that one a bit more)
If you could point me some bumps that i missed i`ll be great
www.mateuszg.com/pliki/Challenger_63.jpg

[LOST]

It looks a lot better now.

1. I don't know this car very well, but those reflections look a little bit strange and wavy, you should check that.

2. It looks like this gap is partially filled and partially not.

But, overall this model looks very good now.

[Icekid84]

Very nice work, but as stated it does have quite a few bumps that refract the reflections. Also.. something bothers me about this car. I cant put my finger on it.. Perhaps its the perspective you have in your renders but its like its too big. Maybe its the placement of your wheels or perhaps you have some shape of the body angled wrong.. I cant say. ANyhow if you had some new images with less perspective and backed away that might help.

[ex3qtor]

LOST
1 - this reflection comes from sky texture. Mesh in this place is fine
2 - i`ll fix it

Icekid84 - here`s clay render especially for You

I saw some places that needs to be fixed like tires and bumper side