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Old 10-07-2007
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1995 Acura Integra

hey all, first post. i mainly joined this site for blueprints, but figured i might as well get my stuff out here for the community to see. so here she is, my first car model. there is some weird stuff going on with it (stuff i'm too lazy to fix), but the model is done for the most part. the reason this is in wip section is because i need to learn how to texture, before i can texture it.
any comments and/or critiques are greatly appreciated!






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Hey, sweet DC2 mate, here's a little bit of criticism for you.

1. You're missing the window rubbers and the door handles.

2. I'm just being picky but the corners of your signals are a bit too sharp.

3. The bottom lip is supposed to be an "add-on" though you made it look like a seam. Just try extending the top edge down and make it seem like a lip.
Try this; http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedi...56/Integra.jpg

4. There's a hard groove on the bonnet, but yours doesn't seem to have it.
http://www.dragtimes.com/images/9418...ra-Integra.jpg

5. The rear bumper needs some chamfers on the upper end.

6. If you're making the Type R then you will notice that the bumper is different around the headlights. You will notice in the picture of the white Integra in number 3.

7. Also, if you're going for a Type R, the rear taillights need to angle down more towards the middle

8. I don't mean to be rude but, GET RID OF THE MASSIVE HUMP ON THE ROOF! haha.

I'll try to spot more when I have some time.

If you were going for a simple tuned look (assuming by having the Spoon wheels) how come you didn't make like a Mugen front lip for it? Would've just set it off nicely, because it looks a bit plain for now.

Very nice modelling pal, I look forward to seeing some progression.
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Hey, sweet DC2 mate, here's a little bit of criticism for you.
1. yea, i was struggling with those more detailed parts, so i figured i can just "fix" those with textures.
3. if the lip is installed correctly, it does look like it's attached to the bumper as one piece. and the photo you posted is the 98+ dc2. my model is of the 94-97 model.
4. yea, i didn't bother with that at all lol...
6. this is a model of my own car, a 95 integra se, not the type-r.
7. see 6.
8. what hump, lol? :S
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You're roof's curve is a little too high, making it look like a hump.

Are you planning to make a nice render for this?
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You're roof's curve is a little too high, making it look like a hump.

Are you planning to make a nice render for this?
i would if i knew how... is there a tutorial for rendering somewhere?
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Please don't bring up old topic, staticrain03. What about PM the author instead ? He's still around there.



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