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Old 04-08-2008
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Hi there,
I've just finished my project "MB-SLK 350", and now this's my old project Suzuki Hayabusa, I couldn't finish before because I have some problems with Max8 and my PC, so now I have to finish this motor bicycle.
These are some images after 1 months. I spent alot of time for the engine, worked with Ref's engine. Waiting your comments guys .
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suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-6.jpg  suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-7.jpg  suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-8.jpg  suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-9.jpg  suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-12.jpg  

suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-13.jpg  suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-24.jpg  suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-11.jpg  suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-22.jpg  

WIP Mercedes SLK 350 Click here
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wow very nice attention to detail but it looks like there are some areas where the holes are that need some more attention but great work overall, do you mind posting some lowpoly wireframes?
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great work so far... it looks realy good...

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Thanks for reply younglion and pedro.malheiro.
Agree with younglion. There are alot of things must to fix. These're some wireframes.
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suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-15.jpg  suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-21.jpg  suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-17.jpg  

WIP Mercedes SLK 350 Click here
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Some test render
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suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-27.jpg  suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-28.jpg  suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-31.jpg  suzuki-hayabusa-beecg-32.jpg  

WIP Mercedes SLK 350 Click here
http://www.BeeCG.narod.ru

Sorry for my Eng
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He BCG,

looking really good so far, but i got some ideas for your progress.

The model looks to soft. Smooth forms would be ok considered the forms of the bike are very rounded, but i think the fairing is really to rounded. Frame and engine is looking really nice. Good Ref material can be found on Bikewalls.com - Motorcycle wallpapers - free! They do have plenty of good pics in really high resolution. Be aware photograph aren't always perfect in the sense of orthognal images for modelling but they'll do.

Keep the work on this up. Nice to see somebody else thinking motorcycles are as easy to model as cars

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There's a small bump above the headlight. Also, as prayas mentioned, the rear looks a bit too smooth/undefined.
Lovely work though. It looks great with all this detail!


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Thanks NightEye and Prayas. I'm trying to fix my model, I know there are alot of faults, my work's going so slow now, I have some tests in university , hope post soon.

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Very nice model, great details. No other critics than the bump NightEye already spotted. Keep it up !

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