Fiat Bravo 2013

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  1. Fajat

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    My concept of fiat bravo..

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    new pictures, old deleted

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    in Photoshop you should make the paint a little bit darcker.
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    Work in progress, approximately 5 / 10 completed..

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    reflections are too high try to decrease the reflections
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    Small changes in..

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    You lose all the point of WIP threads when deleting pictures. :( But well keep up the nice work. :)
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    The car is standing in the shadows, but still have a very sharp shadow. Try using only the softer shadows from the HDRIimage and i think you will have a much more realistic rendering.
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    that´s absolutely right. please don´t do that.
    and if it´s possible please change it back and post your new pictures in a new post.
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    looks nice, but +1 on the shadows. Your shadows don't match the scenes shadows.
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    Progressing slowly, thanks for the advice.;)

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    his light doesn't match the scene light ... the car is to dark compared whit the scenes... it just doesn't fit ;)

    overall it looks good
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    The third one (the dark red) is good.. but generally the car paint looks like chrome material try to fix it.. professionals, suggest some car paint settings for him..

    Good luck..
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    Works are progressing:)

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    you are getting the hang of it slowly.

    in the studio render, the paint is a bit too shiny and too reflective, so much that its almost unrealistic, but it could be the way that you set up the studio, as in you have to many things to reflect.

    in the second render with the background, the background is too blurry compare to the car, as well as the shadow is grainy, increase the shadow subdivision to reduce the graininess.
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    Small redesign

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    Looks much better with the new LED headlights :)

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